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my hometown is Daegu. But now i am living
in studio apartment near my university.
I major Mechatronics digital system. and
I`m junior.
And I grew up in a Incheon. There are big
and famous airport name of Incheon International Airport.And there are
beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go on trip using bicycle,
you must passing there
I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic
point. because There has international airport and harbor
Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to
speak in English to someone.
If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just
tell me!
My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash
decision. But, ironically it is demerit
that i have a lot of things on my mind.
And my another Hobby, computer games.
I like suddenattack so much that i played
all day long last year. So i couldn`t
studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’.
So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
My hometown is Daegu. But now I'm living in studio apartment near my University.
ReplyDeleteMy major is Mechatronics digital system. And I'm a junior
And I grew up in Incheon. Incheon is big. One of the famous airport is in Inchoeon. The name is Incheon International Airport. It is beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go on trip using bicycle, you must passing there.
I grew up in Incheon. It is a important place of traffic. Because It is international airport and port.
Because I'm an introvert, so I'm hard to speak in English to someone.
If you wanna play soccer with me. just tell me!
I am prudent. That is my merit. Because of merit, I don't make a rash decision. But Ironically It is demerit When I have a lot of things on my mind.
And my another hobby is doing computer games.
I like Suddenattack so much. last year I played Suddenattack all day long. So I couldn`t study well. But I really like my school. Aren't you think so too?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’. That mean is 'seize the day'.
My hometown is Daegu. But now I am living in studio apartment near my university.
ReplyDeleteI am majoring in Mechatronics digital system. And I`m a junior.
And I grew up in a Incheon. In Incheon, there is a big and famous airport, Incheon International Airport. And it a has beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go on a trip using bicycle, you have to go there
Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.
If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!
I am prudent. This is my merit Because of it, I don't make a rash decision. But, Ironically it is demerit that I have a lot of things on my mind.
And my another Hobby is playing computer games.
I like suddenattack so much that last year I played all day long. So I couldn`t study well. But I really like my school. Aren`t you think so too?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that means seize the day.
My hometown is Daegu. But now I am living in studio apartment near my university.
ReplyDeleteI`m majoring in Mechatronics digital system. And I`m a junior.
And I grew up in Incheon. There is a big and famous airport name of Incheon International Airport. And there is a beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go on trip using bicycle, you must passing there
I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. Because There are international airport and harbor
It is hard to speak in English to someone. because I'm introvert
If you wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!
I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, Ironically it is demerit that I have a lot of things on my mind.
And my another Hobby is playing computer games.
I like suddenattack so much that last year I played all day long. So I couldn`t study well. But I really like my school. Aren`t you think so too?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. so my motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean is seize the day.
My hometown is Daegu but now I'm living in studio apartment near my university.
ReplyDeleteI study Mechatronics Digital System and I`m a junior.
And I grew up in a Incheon. It is a big and It has a famous airport of Incheon International Airport. Incheon has a beautiful canal with cycle track so if you want to go on a trip using a bicycle, you must pass the canal.
I grew up in Incheon. It is a major traffic point because It has a international airport and harbor.
Because I'm an introvert. I'm hard to speak English to someone.
If anyone want to play soccer with me, just tell me!
My merit is a prudent. I don't make a rash decision because of this merit. But, ironically it is demerit that I have a lot of things on my mind.
And my another Hobby is computer games.
I like suddenattack so much. I played suddenattack everyday in last year so i couldn`t study well....... But I really like my school. Aren`t you think so too?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’ so my motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean is 'seize the day'.
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ReplyDelete1. My hometown is Daegu, but now I am living in a studio apartment near my university.
ReplyDelete2. I major in Mechatronics digital system, and I`m a junior.
3. And I grew up in Incheon. Incheon is big and have famous airport name of Incheon International Airport, And Incheon is beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go on trip using bicycle, you must passing there
4. I grew up in Incheon. Incheon is a major traffic point, because Incheon has international airport and harbor.
5. Because I'm an introvert, (so) (and) It is hard to speak English with someone.
6. If anyone want to play soccer with me, just tell me!
7. My merit is that I am prudent person. Because this merit make me don't make a rash decision, But ironically it is demerit that I have a lot of things on my mind.
8. And my another hobby is playing computer games.
9. I like suddenattack so much that I played all day long last year, so I couldn`t studied well....... But I really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
10. My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’, so My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
my hometown is Daegu. But now i am living in studio apartment near my university.
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My hometown is Daegu, but now I'm living in studio apartment near my University.
I major Mechatronics digital system. and I`m junior.
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I am majoring in Mechatronics digital system. And I`m a junior.
And I grew up in a Incheon. There are big and famous airport name of Incheon International Airport. And there are beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go on trip using bicycle, you must passing there
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And I grew up in Incheon. The big and famous airport located in Incheon name of Incheon International Airport. And in Incheon beautiful canal with cycle track is located, too. So if you want to go on trip using a bicycle, you must passing there.
I grew up Incheon. There is a major traffic point. because There has international airport and harbor
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I grew up in Incheon. It is a major traffic point, because It has a international airport and harbor.
Because I'm an introvert, It is hard to speak in English to someone.
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I'm hard to speak English to someone, because I'm an introvert.
If anyone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!
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If someone want to play soccer with me, tell me!
My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But, ironically it is demerit that i have a lot of things on my mind.
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I am prudent. It is my merit. Because of it make I don't make a rash decision. But ironically it is demerit that I have a lot of things on my mind.
And my another Hobby, computer games.
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And my another hobby is playing computer games.
I like suddenattack so much that i played all day long last year. So i couldn`t studied well....... But i really like my school. aren`t you think so too?
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I like Suddenattack so much. So last year I played Suddenattack all day long. So I couldn`t study well. But I really like my school. Aren't you think so, either?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So My motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean seize the day.
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My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So my motto is ‘carpe diem’. That means 'seize the day'.
My hometown is Daegu, but now I am living in studio apartment near my university.
ReplyDeleteI am majoring in Mechatronics digital system, and i’m a junior.
And I grew up in Incheon. There is big and famous airport, Incheon International Airport, and there is beautiful canal with cycle track. So if you want to go on a trip using bicycle, you have to go there.
I grew up in Incheon. It is major place of traffic. Because It has international airport and harbor.
Because i’m an introvert, So it is hard to speak in English to someone.
If someone wanna play soccer with me, just tell me!
My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don’t make rash decision, but ironically it is demerit that I have a lot of things in my mind.
And my another hobby is computer games.
I like ‘Sudden Attack’ so much, So I played that all day long last year. So I couldn’t study well... But I really like my school. Aren’t you think so, either?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’. So my motto is ‘carpe diem’. That means ‘seize the day’.
My hometown is Daegu. But now I am living in studio apartment near my university.
ReplyDeleteI major in Mechatronics digital system and I`m a junior.
And I grew up in Incheon. There is a big and famous airport. Its name is Incheon International Airport. Incheon has beautiful canal with cycle track, so if you want to go on a trip using bicycle, you must pass there.
I grew up in Incheon. There is a major traffic point because it has a international airport and harbor.
It is hard to speak in English for someone because I'm an introvert.
If anyone wants to play soccer with me, just tells me!
My merit is that I am prudent. Because of this merit, I don't make a rash decision. But ironically it is a demerit that I have a lot of things on my mind.
And my another hobby is playing computer games.
I like suddenattack so much. So last year I played suddenattack all day long. So I couldn't study well....... But I really like my school, don't you think so too?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’, so my motto is ‘carpe diem'. That means 'seize the day'.
My hometown is Daegu but now I'm living in studio apartment near my university.
ReplyDeleteI study Mechatronics Digital System and I`m a junior.
And I grew up in a Incheon. It is a big and It has a famous airport of Incheon International Airport. Incheon has a beautiful canal with cycle track so if you want to go on a trip using a bicycle, you must pass the canal.
I grew up in Incheon. It is a major traffic point because It has a international airport and harbor.
Because I'm an introvert. I'm hard to speak English to someone.
If anyone want to play soccer with me, just tell me!
My merit is a prudent. I don't make a rash decision because of this merit. But, ironically it is demerit that I have a lot of things on my mind.
And my another Hobby is computer games.
I like suddenattack so much. I played suddenattack everyday in last year so i couldn`t study well....... But I really like my school. Aren`t you think so too?
My favorite movie is ‘Dead Poets Society’ so my motto is ‘carpe diem’ that mean is 'seize the day'.