Thursday, April 3, 2014

week two corrections


Week 2 corrections

And I sometimes play food volleyball with my friends.

Incorrect use of a conjunction.   For, and, nor, but, or, yet, so.   Conjunctions connect two sentences.

I think the best way to keep fit is not eat too much. So if i were hungry, i didn't eat too much.

I think the best way to keep fit is not eat too much.

Form     to + base form,   to + not + base form

I think the best way to keep fit is to not eat too much.

Incorrect use of a conjunction

If I were hungry, I didn't eat too much.

Conditional

Not real, but possible

Form

If I were hungry, I wouldn’t eat too much.

I like playing basketball, so I play a basketball with my friends at weekend.

Play basketball

On the weekends, on weekends              weekends = every weekend

Exercise is a great way to keep fit. I always do fifty push ups and I play table tennis 2 times a week. I run when I feel good. I sometimes play badminton with my friends at the courts near my apartment

Good job!!!

I sometimes walking and go jogging at night.

Missing verb

Go walking

I usually eat rice, eat fruit.

I usually eat rice and fruit.

I usually eat rice, and I eat fruit.

 

Actually, I seldom exercise and play sports.

Other frequency adverbs.   Hardly, rarely, scarcely, often, barely

I often stretch muscles of legs.

I often stretch the muscles of my legs.    I often stretch my leg muscles.

In fact, I do seldom excercise for keep fit regularly. It doesn't mean 'I don't like excercise'. I just do excercise for fun.

Word order

I seldom do exercise

for keep fit

to keep fit

I wake up every morning and 30 minutes in the morning and exercise before going to push up the habit of more than 10 times also use the stairs instead of using the elevator and walk to the nearest distance.

Don’t use Google Translate.

I like play table tennis, badminton. But nowdays I don't do exercise,.Because I'm busy.

I like play table tennis, badminton.

I like to play table tennis and badminton.

But nowdays I don't do exercise,.

Incorrect use of a conjunction.

Because I'm busy.

Incorrect use of a conjunctive adverb

Nowadays I don’t do exercise because I’m busy.

It is little tired but I can feel that my body is cleansed.

Base form + ed   and base form + ing can be used as adjectives.

Base form + ed modifies people

Base form + ing modifies things.

I’m excited (base form + ed) to attend Thursday’s evening class.

This evening is exciting.

I sometimes do martial arts, takkeon.

I sometimes do takkeon.

To sleep enough and to eat healthy food is also important way to keep fit but Koreatech don't allow that.

Koreatech don't allow that.

Simple present tense, form

Subject (third person singular) + doesn’t + base form

Even though you sleep well and take exercise every day, if you eat unhealthy food like a junk food or eat only what you want, you will get sick.

Do exercise

Usually I go to bed at 2A.M., so I'm so tired every morning.

Good job!!!

I agree, jason.

 Jason     Please capitalize the names of people, even the names of unimportant people like your English teacher.

I always drink water,and it keeps my fit very well.

it keeps my fit very well

it helps me to keep fit

I also do push ups in my spare time. I do push ups some. But I often do.

                                                                           Word order

                                                                          I do some push ups.

But I often do.

Incorrect use of a conjunction

I often do

Missing object.

I often do them.

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